Just How Important is a College Admissions Essay?

by | Apr 20, 2017

It’s a question any person involved in college admissions planning gets asked a lot. Whether you’re applying to a selective private university or a state school, how much difference does a great college essay make? And what really makes for a great essay?

So here’s an answer. For college admissions, with some exceptions, the biggest factors are test scores and transcripts. Universities are always looking first for students who will be able to do the work they require. That means looking for students who have taken, and succeeded at, challenging academic courses in high school. It means students who have sufficiently high test scores on standardized tests. For most students, there isn’t really a substitute for showing you you can excel with a challenging course load.

There are exceptions, of course. Top athletes, musicians, actors, artists, are all examples of the exceptions. The criteria are often relaxed if you show some extraordinary ability at something the school really wants.

But for virtually every selective school, there are more students who meet the academic criteria than they can admit. And that is where the college essay comes in. A great essay can help set you apart from all the others who might get in. And unlike your grade on a Calculus course, a great college essay isn’t an objective evaluation, it’s a subjective decision. Different admissions officials at different schools will make different decisions.

That’s because what makes a college essay great isn’t based on what you learned in English class. A great college admissions essay might not get a good grade in school. Here’s what college officials are looking for:

  • Is it authentic and interesting? College admissions officials are looking for an essay that really shows who you are. As Parke Muth, who served at the admissions office for the University of Virginia, and read thousands of essays, put it: “I wanted to hear and see and touch and smell and feel the world you are in.”
  • Does it stand out? Admissions officials read dozens of essays each day, so make sure yours stands out. The standard five-paragraph essay you wrote in high school doesn’t. So use literary devices (like one-sentence paragraphs, starting at the high point of your story, or dialogue) to set it apart. Pick a subject that is unusual, interesting, and personal, and isn’t just meant to “impress” someone (and yes, that means you shouldn’t write yet another essay about a community service trip to Honduras).
  • Does it tell a compelling story about you that shows how you’d fit into the school’s community? Different universities value different kinds of students. Some value creative minds, some value students who care about causes and communities, some value students who are passionate about their culture or religious faith. Depending on where you’re applying, make sure your essay shows the admissions official how you’d fit in.
  • Does it read like an adult wrote it? Too many students outsource their essay to an adult. A parent or a coach writes it for them, so they can write an “impressive” essay. But admissions officials can tell. It is the killer mistake, so don’t make it.

A great college essay is critical if you’re applying to selective schools. There are many students with your grades and test scores. Make sure you tell a story that sets you apart.

How to get started writing a great essay? One way is to take a course on writing great narrative essays. You can also work with a coach, or a writing instructor. But the best way to learn how to write is to do it. Write mock essays in sophomore year. The more you write, the better you’ll be at it.

The good thing is, whether you use an essay for college or not, learning how to write is a crucial skill for success in the workplace and in life. So it’s great to build the skill early, and you can use it to be successful wherever you go to college!

Editor’s Note: A version of this article appeared on GreatSchools on October 18, 2019, at this link.

2 Comments

  1. Sharon Saria

    This is a great article. The one “idea” I was looking for you addressed, and I’m so glad you did. It would be tempting for me to write my son’s college admissions essay because I know it’s not one of his strong points. At the same time, his character will shine through on his own, and that will be a positive for him. Since we know a teacher who can help him with writing, that will be the course we take. Also practice, practice, practice as you suggest! My piano teacher used to say, not just practice makes perfect, but “perfect practice makes perfect.” I’m not into being perfect, but great effort goes a long way.
    Thank you, Sharon Saria, better known as Douglas’s mom 😊

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Venkates Swaminathan

Venkates Swaminathan

Venkates Swaminathan (Swami) is the founder and CEO of LifeLaunchr, the world's first virtual college admissions coaching platform, and a member of the National Association for College Admission Counseling. Swami has been an executive in the education and technology industries for over 25 years. He has an M.S. in Electrical and Computer Engineering from the University of Illinois, and a B.Tech in Electrical Engineering from the Indian Institute of Technology Delhi. He is the father of a child in college, and in his spare time, he is a jazz and Indian classical singer and pianist.

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